Changes between Version 10 and Version 11 of WikiStart

Timestamp:

Aug 8, 2009, 12:41:18 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

FILLIPO

Comment:

more respect towards english grammar, slight readability improvements. frankly speaking, still some phrases sound weird. unfortunatelly, have no ideas how to change them(

WikiStart

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 == What is DjangoBB? ==
 
-DjangoBB is a quick and simple forum that uses the Django Framework (written in Python language). 
-The code of the [http://pybb.org/ PyBB forum], which originator is Grigoriy Petukhov, was decided to be a basis of the engine.
+DjangoBB is a quick and simple forum which uses the Django Framework (written in Python language). 
+The code of the [http://pybb.org/ PyBB forum], by Grigoriy Petukhov, was chosen to be the basis of the engine.
 Abbreviation DjangoBB stands for '''Django''' '''B'''ulletin '''B'''oard.
 DjangoBB is distributed under the BSD license.
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 == The basic concept of the forum progress is: ==
 
- * usage of various DBMS (MySQL, PostgreSQL, Oracle, SQLite)
- * ease of integration into any Django project and ease of installation
- * usage of standard libraries for launching on conventional hostings with python support
- * easy installation process accessible to an average user
+ * the usage of various DBMS (MySQL, PostgreSQL, Oracle, SQLite)
+ * the ease of integration into any Django project and the ease of installation
+ * the usage of standard libraries for launching on conventional hostings with python support
+ * user-friendly installation process 
  * classic view of the forum like IPB, PhpBB, Punbb
  * easy forum setup
  * high speed
- * security
+ * reliability
 
-At this stage of development the chief object is a functional implementation of the PunBB forum, in the sequel it is projected to expand it significantly.
+At the current stage of development the main object is the functional implementation of the PunBB forum, in the sequel it is projected to expand it significantly.
 
 == How to get DjangoBB sources? ==
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 == "Why another forum?" ==
 
-We consider at the moment there is no usable engine written in Django, existing implementations are too simple and have little function.
+As far`as we are conserned, there is no usable engine written in Django. In our humble opinion, existing implementations are too simple and have little function.
 
 == Sites using DjangoBB ==